I wonder about the weather -
I have to go out - and its seems
Get wet.
I am debating it - from the safety of my bed -
While working - supposedly -
Anyway - the point -
What's it like with you?
I do like this Hannah - it works well as a 'found' poem but also engages the imagination. Who is the poet communicating with? Why are they (where are they?) in bed? And I love the image of someone in bed contemplating a move but being derailed by the rain.
I do like this Hannah - it works well as a 'found' poem but also engages the imagination. Who is the poet communicating with? Why are they (where are they?) in bed? And I love the image of someone in bed contemplating a move but being derailed by the rain.
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